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fitbabits
07-13-2008, 04:50 PM
Sheesh! What a week. I've barely had time to... Never mind.

Anyway, without further ado, the winners of the recent Battlefield: Bad Company competition (http://www.evilavatar.com/forums/showthread.php?t=56481) are...

Kelegacy

I’m Travis “Rad” Radcliff.

Before I tossed down my ink at the recruitment office, I was a no talent clown. Literally. Kids’ birthdays, making those animal balloons, big floppy shoes, all that. Cliffy the Clown. Loud scary laugh and overzealous makeup. But it was better than being a magician. I didn’t have the mustache for that gig, and I sure didn’t have a lot of luck with rabbits. Just lots of crying, frightened kids.

I was one of those rare flunkies whose conditioning in basic just never seeded. Yet I was a good soldier, or at least good enough to avoid a dishonorable discharge after an incident at a Turkish brothel found its way back to an MP who may or may not still breathe with a whistle out his left nostril.

A controllable war-lust for blood and the acrid smell of freshly fired weaponry is something the Army sympathizes with and secretly desires in their infantry fodder. I was too valuable to be consigned once more to pulling tissues out of my sleeve or taking a pie in the face for some suburban brat.

The Bad Company, for better or worse, is a place where my inner psychotic can be satisfied and my penchant for antics tolerated. It ain’t no cake walk, and that’s alright with me. They appreciate results here, not politics. We’re misfits in Bad, but where else is a magician clown-beserker going to find a place in the military?

Blue

In the Summer of ’44 my grandmother, Clara Louise Collins-Bone, entered herself into the First Annual Steel Cage Bear Wrestling Competition in Appleton, Wisconsin. She lost (may she rest in peace), lasting a miraculous six minutes and fourteen seconds before the bear attacked with what the judges determined to be an illegal choke-hold. Stricken with grief at his wife’s sudden passing, Samson Bone – my grandfather – enlisted in the 117th Battalion of the Army Guard in order to, according to family legend, "nab himself a German and see the world." You can find this exact quote on the Bone family crest just beneath the spread bald eagle.

Sadly, Grandpa Bone managed to do neither of these things leaving for boot camp the Wednesday following Clara’s death where he trained for a grueling six weeks only to then be sent to the dark and mysterious front of Oak Ridge, Tennessee. There, for the remainder of the war (and his life), he guarded a factory of some repute.

Looking to extend upon my grandfather’s legacy, I joined Traditional Security Inc. (a division of a division of the 117th Battalion) upon graduating High School in the hopes of landing a Government job overseeing the protection of a steel mill or lumber yard. However, through severe mis-communication between my superiors and the misplacement of my J9 RKL-001 form, I instead found myself deployed to the 22nd Army Battalion – a group also referred to as “Bad Company” in quieter circles – despite any formal combat training on my part. They have since adopted me as their own and given me the rank of Beer Gopher Class C and I’ve been told that should I apply myself, I can hope to see Class B in as little as four months. Here’s hoping.

My name is J. Elijah Bone and I am a Beer Gopher for Bad Company. Grandpa Bone would be proud.
Congratulations, boys. To claim your prize, send your legal name address to me here (evavgiveaway@gmail.com). I'll endeavor to get the games out to you this week.

Oh, and if anyone's interested, the mystery prize goes to Elvio. You can read his entry after the jump.

fitbabits
07-13-2008, 04:53 PM
Elvio's entry:

Jose Diego Fernadez Garcia De La Villareal, or as Haggard (un)affectionately calls him “Nablonglés”, was a recent immigrant to the United States.

Jose was eager to find a job and start living the American dream, but instead of entering an employment office he accidentally walked into a military recruitment center. Not fully understanding the forms he was signing, he presented his false documentation to the kindly old “gringo” who kept smiling at him the entire time. Eager to have able-bodied men deployed as rapidly as possible for the oncoming war, the officer failed to double-check Jose’s documentation and told him to be back at the office in the morning. Jose arrived, and, to his horror, was promptly shipped off to boot camp.

At boot camp, Jose proved himself to being a dedicated worker, especially considering how little he was being rewarded, and was marked for deployment, despite clearly lacking the ability to communicate in English.

Meanwhile, Army Command had discovered the blunder at the recruitment center, and, instead of allowing the information to become public and causing a PR disaster, decided to place Jose in B Company, the unit with the highest mortality rate in the war, hoping that the enemy would erase the mistake.

Jose was placed under the command of Sargeant Samuel D. Redford, a gruff old man who could care less about the soldiers beneath him. Since then Jose has become adept at being the squad’s recon soldier, due to his skills at sneaking in behind enemy lines. Unfortunately, his inability to properly communicate enemy movements has led to many disastrous B Company skirmishes which, on the flip-side, has caused him to fit right in with the rest of the squad.
Elvio - send me (evavgiveaway@gmail.com) your name and address to claim your mystery prize!

Blue
07-13-2008, 05:09 PM
Holy crap. Thanks fits!

Expugnare
07-13-2008, 05:12 PM
Congrats to Kel and Blue. Nice writing you got there.

abso
07-13-2008, 05:21 PM
Nice job guys. Grats on winning.

mister_slim
07-13-2008, 06:05 PM
Nice work guys, though the clown piece is basically sterile by the standard of Kelegacy writing. I expect better next time, Kele.

Zero
07-13-2008, 06:20 PM
Sweet! Thanks, fitbabits! I noticed Kelegacy and Blue wrote theirs in first person. I considered it, but I don't think anybody would have wanted to read a Spanish wall of text. :p

Kelegacy
07-13-2008, 06:52 PM
Nice work guys, though the clown piece is basically sterile by the standard of Kelegacy writing. I expect better next time, Kele.
Definitely tame. And I'm sort of a bit embarrassed it's displayed...definitely not my best piece, as we both know. But whatever! It won me a game!! So suck it, slim! Suck it and weep!!

I promise, my next vignette will contain more seeping cocks and blubbering vaginas.

Siraris
07-13-2008, 06:56 PM
Yea Kel and Blue, great stuff guys. Extra points to Blue for use of dead grandmas and bears.

rein
07-13-2008, 07:15 PM
I can't believe Fit's let a clown entry win. A Clown! I guess Fits is hoping the clown meets the same fate Army Command is wanting for Jose.

Good job guys.

Spigot
07-13-2008, 07:51 PM
I knew there was a reason I didn't this... it's a contest that required effort and skill!

Congrats guys!

fitbabits
07-13-2008, 07:56 PM
I can't believe Fit's let a clown entry win. A Clown! I guess Fits is hoping the clown meets the same fate Army Command is wanting for Jose.

Good job guys.

Kel knows clowns. Like, really knows! I felt I had no other option.

Call off the clowns, Kel. Please?

Magnanimous Gnome
07-13-2008, 08:22 PM
Congrats guys, and great job!

Jackel
07-13-2008, 08:37 PM
Congrats guys on the hardwork...enjoy the game :)

divinechaos
07-13-2008, 08:45 PM
Hahaha! I laughed at "Nablongles". I imagine not many people here got that.

saulob
07-13-2008, 09:18 PM
Congrats guys. Nice writing :)

vivafletcher
07-14-2008, 01:08 AM
What, now I have to actually go and buy this game? For, like, money? Sheesh.

Congrats, guys. Entertaining pieces all.

Reverend Meta
07-14-2008, 02:18 AM
I enjoyed all three a lot.